I like where you are going with this
The overall mood of this song is pretty sombre; I picture a bleeding comrade-in-arms uttering his last words before he passes on. I'm not normally a fan of reverse cymbals, but you've used them to good effect. I felt the bridge where the brass appears for the first time was a little hollow; the depth that the rest of the song had was gone. Maybe it's personal taste but I think a french horn would substitute well at that point. Your music is still underrated in my opinion, you're high up in my books. 5 again.