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[The Artifact]

very bizarre

I like the backgrounds a lot in this work, and for a first animation the drawing wasn't that bad. At least it wasn't stick men. The actual story/plot was to me incomprehensible. I'm giving you the benifit of the doubt and will say that was your aim.

From a style point of view I think a couple of film scratches would have really set this off, but you can't have everything, eh? Good work; you'll only improve as time goes by.

clevelandsteamer1 responds:

Thanks for the comment, I 100% agree with your film scratches advice, and actually thought about putting them in, only I got kinda lazy. Good advice, good critique, thanks.

[Emily Vs. The Zombie]

Good for your first Flash

Pretty well done for a first go, but the file size is massive. Do you have the ability to compress your audio, as that could be a problem in future (I'm assuming that's the reason but it may not be)?

Gossio-el-Diablos responds:

yeah, when i tried to load it first time it took so long that I thought it wasn't going to load at all. I think you're right that it's the audio, a couple of other folks have said as much.
Cheers for the reveiw mate.

[Zero]

Zero is so understated

It's a shame he isn't really that hard. Because it is a sprite animation it'll probably get quite a low score, but I quite liked it.

acicon-orig responds:

I know what your saying about the low score biz. I really suck at drawing on the computer so I did a sprite thing. Thanks anyway!

[Freak: Episode 2]

There was one problem...

I pressed the vote button, and raised your score to 4.22. Why didn't it stay at 5 when I did this? Who didn't vote 5!?

Evil-Dog responds:

hehehe I don't know, a bunch of....not cool...people! :P

[The Glove]

Refreshing to see some claymation

Claymation is more difficult to do in my opinion than a Flash animation, in particular to get it to look good. Keep it up and keep practicing with the clay; you'll only get better over time.

BobtehLog responds:

thanks for the nice review :) this is only our 2nd claymation iswell